I am not an instructor yet but I do coach people. 🙂 This is my personal observation and feedback is as follows. Improvement area: 1. After 21st second, the voice becomes like a man, a mortal human. You may want to sound consistent. 2. Between 1:29 - 1:31, try to sound persuasive and tone it when you say - It's a system. I believe that is the key to the whole course - you are selling 'a system'. Try to sound... umm... like Jordan Belfort style - sales high-pitched-slow-motion-whispering tone. Get me? 3. Between 2:47 - 2:49, that lip wetting, please try not do that. Awesome area: 1. Your voice between 0 to 20 seconds is thick and grandfather / wise-zen - ly. Which immediately caught my attention and wanted me to look up to you for real advices - which is exactly what you are giving out. 2. Your introduction in the end is modest and humble, no brags, love it. 10/10... 3. I would DEFINITELY look up for this course and also recommend it to my mates. Because the initial video gives a feeling that this course will be a life changer. 4. You "feel" like a genuine human. Remember, people buy feelings and not just products. You got 10/10 for that. If you are just being yourself, that is a 10/10, straight up!
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