Hey, It's much better now. I'm not perfect when it comes to creating videos. But I think, you can improve this a little further. Here we go: Pros: 1. Your language is good 2. You are showing your face which is much better 3. Video quality seems to be great. Issues I think.. 1. You are too fast.. Slow down 2. I was lost in the middle. I prefer if you give the agenda first like a check list and then check them out 1 by 1 as you finish explaining each topic/subject in the checklist. 3. Don't rush. Few words are still not very clear. So, I'd prefer clear pronunciation. 4. I can't keep a track of where you are and where you are gonna go next. May be this is because of I have no idea what you are gonna do next or may be because of you are too fast. Honestly, I respect that you ask for the feedback and change your videos based on that. I think, you'll create a great course. Good luck.
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