Feedback on YouTube short

Question

Hello,

I made a YouTube Short to promote my courses and would really appreciate your feedback. Please don’t hold back, I’m sure there’s plenty of room for improvement. I hope this isn’t seen as promotion.

Thanks!

Here’s the link:

https://youtube.com/shorts/TjRHdOSBrlc?feature=share

RajuDyapur745 · Accepted Answer

"Courses on Sale" should be the main CTA for the video and is not clear till the end of the video.

When you put the titles of subjects, it is better to put the words as "Course in ……"

Start the video by saying "If you want to improve ……." OR "if you want to get better at…." OR "Courses that can get you from …. to ….".

At least this will be a good start. Please keep it very clean without so many videos in the background. Just images are more than enough.