Welcome Feedback - First Class Intro Video

McCleish868
McCleish868 Posts: 9 researcher rank
in First-time course creation

Hi everyone,

I would really like to get feedback on my first class I am looking to build on udemy. Have just completed the promo video and welcome feedback as I continue along the building process.

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  • MalayaBiswal
    MalayaBiswal Posts: 23 trailblazer rank

    Good one. I would like if you connect the first part of the video with the introduction. What I mean is once the first clip is shown just say that "the clip you just saw was edited in mobile and it took just 10 mins of time and by end of this course you will also be able to do the same". This is my suggestion.

  • DavidBookbinder
    DavidBookbinder Posts: 83 storyteller rank

    I agree with the previous comment -- I was a little startled when you switched from the initial scene to the rest of the video and couldn't see the connection.

    But, I quickly got interested in what you were saying and showing. Nicely done, very impressive.

    My only suggestion would be to vary your voice so the pace and emphasis are not so monotone.

    Best of luck with the course,

    David

  • RichardDeut752
    RichardDeut752 Posts: 46 trailblazer rank

    Nice job! Clever / fun beginning. We’ll summarized.

  • AliciaPaz
    AliciaPaz Posts: 294 visionary rank

    I third the very beginning being misaligned with the rest. That being said I think maybe something less dramatic and long could have the same impact and humor. Overall audio, video, quality and what you will learn is crystal clear! Oh and bonus for me 2 min is the perfect length for a viewer IMO. Overall 9/10 I think it was great, might be that your expertise is video making ;)

  • McCleish868
    McCleish868 Posts: 9 researcher rank

    Thanks for the feedback thus far everyone. Can look at how I can shorten the beginning and still provide the punch and humour I am looking for.

    @AliciaPaz
    Actually I do film productions. Not sure if I am allowed to share a sample of one of my short films. If I can, will do via a reply.

  • DavidBookbinder
    DavidBookbinder Posts: 83 storyteller rank

    I think the rule is that we can't link to anything requiring us to pay money or join your email list or group. I'd love to see the kinds of films you do.

  • McCleish868
    McCleish868 Posts: 9 researcher rank

    Ok well I believe, it should be safe since it is youtube @DavidBookbinder

    This is one of them for the non profit organization I belong to:
    Making the Right Choices

  • DavidBookbinder
    DavidBookbinder Posts: 83 storyteller rank

    Pretty chilling, but nicely done. I think you'll be really helpful to those of us who are completely new at making videos, so it's nice that you're here!

    David

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