Feedback on English accent best for western countries

[SamirImtiaz1996]

Hi,

I need feedback for my English accent, suitable for people of western countries. I'll be grateful and remember your help if you rate these two videos. 

This is video one

This is video two

Thanks 

Samir Imtiaz

[Elissalara8787]

You have a strong accent that makes it hard to understand the words you say which affects the idea you want to convey... i can help you with that I'm teaching english course basic- to -advance,  enunciation and accents is something that takes practice and help