Brother I had no idea about business but I think your instruction strategy should be changed a bit. I think instead of slides if you look at all other instructors they show themselves looking presentable. Yes you can show your slides but explain it a bit by your presence. This will project your confidence. I think that's what the world demands, confidence. But I could be wrong.
Thank you for submitting your test video for review. Overall, I found the video to be well-structured and informative. Your teaching style is engaging.
The area for improvement could be the pacing of the video. At times, the video felt a bit rushed and I think it would be helpful to slow down and allow more time for explanations and examples. Try to use examples to illustrate your points. Additionally, I noticed that the audio quality was a bit low at times and it was a bit difficult to hear what you were saying.
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Overall, I think this is a strong test video and I believe you have the skills and knowledge to create a valuable course on Udemy. Keep up the good work!