Can you guys critique my course landing page and promo video?

[ShakhizadaI655]

Hi guys! I find this community to be incredibly helpful, thank you for all the amazing info you guys put out here 🙂 

I feel like I read a lot of Udemy tips and tricks on how to create my promo video and course landing page; however, my sales have been slow this month and I was wondering whether I should make some changes to my landing page description or promo video to make it more appealing for the Udemy algorithm and potential buyers. Here is the link to my course: https://www.udemy.com/course/academic-writing-at-university-level-for-esl-students/learn/lecture/225...

I would appreciate if you could provide some advice/critique! 

Thank you in advance, 

Shakhi. 

[HSE-Trainer]

Dear Shaki

1. The title can be improved, can be made more catchy
2. Most points in the learning objectives and the description are same, it can be made more different 
3. Course image doesn't resonate with the course title.

My two cents

[ShakhizadaI655]

thank you! What would be make a more appropriate course image? 

Kind regards, 

Shakhi 

[HSE-Trainer]

It would be good if image shows picture of a person making a document rather than picture of a person throwing documents 🙂