Hi @VipinJoshi there is a lot of information we don't need to know, your date of birth for a start. It has an awkward formal feel to it. Plus you have overused the bold text. Try this - introduce who you are, what you are teaching and why in a more conversational way. Then in the next paragraph say how you are going to teach people, then have your first list of qualifications
You could try to bullet point your qualifications into one list
Why they should learn from you and follow this with a second list for career achievements.
Sharon Ramel
Spiritual Guide, Shaman, Priestess of the Blue Rose
