Generally, it looks good to me. Of course, I am making some assumptions since unfortunately I don't speak Spanish. The number of languages at the beginning is amazingly impressive! Couple things fwiw: 1. The cuts between the language examples at the beginning is very abrupt. When I have had to make transitions in my course, sometimes I have a half second to one second fade out of the previous content. In Camtasia you can do a transition that causes an image to gradually fade out over a certain time period. Even a half second of fade out can make a transition to a new piece of content much smoother. And you can fade in new content as well, so over half a second it fades in, and then starts. Now, this is a minor comment. Not make or break. Doesn't have to be done as an urgent matter tomorrow. Just might improve it a bit. For your consideration. 2. At about the one minute mark you make a reference to your website. This might or might not be ok, I'm not sure. I know that generally speaking you are only allowed to "market" your own products and services in the final "Bonus Lecture" - marketing anywhere else is not allowed, since Udemy really does not want students to find educational material is marketing to them. However, I am not sure what your reference here was, if it was simply "there are free resources like a download of checklists at this website", it might be ok. If it was "buy my services at this website", it would not be. And any references cannot ask for email addresses, so if your website asks for an email address to provide a checklist, that would not be allowed. Except in the bonus lecture. Suggest others reading this post chip in with their opinion, and/or suggest you double check that brief reference with policy@udemy.com. These restrictions can seem quite restrictive, but you don't want to make a policy violation, so might be worth double-checking. This is completely opposite of a Youtube video of course, where marketing anywhere and everywhere is very common. Hope this helps. Keep up the great work! Cheers, Bill
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