Plz watch and tell about my audio and delivery , and English

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  • Abbie
    Abbie Posts: 3,191 traveler rank

    Hey @pruthviks
    and @NancyV
    and @pruthviks, sharing and receiving feedback is one of the great uses that you can make of this community. Since you're both looking for it, how about sharing each other's opinions? :smileyvery-happy:

  • SharonRamel
    SharonRamel Posts: 1,311 rolemodel rank

    Hi @pruthviks
    this is a good first try. Rehearse, rehearse, rehearse until you sound comfortable speaking English. Listen to it yourself (we often don't like to do that) until it flows with ease. Your diction is clear and I can understand you. As you gain more confidence speaking in English we will hear to you really know your business and love what you do. At the moment we hear the struggle to be understood.

    The sound quality is excellent - well done as audio is so important for the student to have a positive experience.

    Don't forget that many people watch on the App on their phones so be wary of having a lot of text on the screen (especially if you want students to read the text).

  • pruthviks
    pruthviks Posts: 4 researcher rank

    Thanks for feedback Sharon . i had created the new video and i had taken your suggestions and in this video i had seen many improvements .. please watch and provide suggestion about this video

  • SharonRamel
    SharonRamel Posts: 1,311 rolemodel rank

    Much better @pruthviks
    , keep practising - you sounds far more confident and at ease. Well done. There is a small amount of background noise - not an irritating amount - maybe you didn't remove it. Good luck with producing your course.

  • pruthviks
    pruthviks Posts: 4 researcher rank

    Hey SharonRamel .. thanks for review.. I was used new audio device, fixed background noise, created new audio please watch and tell me about my english .. will students able to hear this audio and please tell me suggestions ..

  • SharonRamel
    SharonRamel Posts: 1,311 rolemodel rank

    Hi @pruthviks
    , are you using a pop filter? Or maybe you are too close to the microphone as there is a lot of extra noise coming through. I am not an audio expert.

    Yes I can hear you clearly, as you become more comfortable you sound better - I am now hearing some inflection in your voice which makes it more enjoyable to listen to.

  • NWCIC
    NWCIC Posts: 1 observer rank

    Hi @pruthviks
    James here. Brand new member and instructor making my first video. This thread is a good example of progressive learning and advice. Your progress is definitely showing. The pop filter is a good idea. If you can't afford one, there are DIY solutions online that are cheap or free.

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