Can you listen to my test recording and suggest any improvements?

RazaUsman_K
RazaUsman_K Posts: 1 observer rank
in Audio and video solutions

I've been actually away for a while and now i started making a new a course so i would really appreciate if you guyz would give some suggestions


Also i have some questions about my delivery
1 - Is my english accent understandable? can you understand every word in the video ? if not how much of it can you understand?
2 - Am i speaking too fast ?
3 - I use bullet points as scripts, but my friend said that it sounded like i was just reading from a paper. Do you feel the same ?




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  • Mona364
    Mona364 Posts: 23 traveler rank

    not good at all

    @RazaUsman_K
    wrote:

    I've been actually away for a while and now i started making a new a course so i would really appreciate if you guyz would give some suggestions

    Also i have some questions about my delivery
    1 - Is my english accent understandable? can you understand every word in the video ? if not how much of it can you understand?
    2 - Am i speaking too fast ?
    3 - I use bullet points as scripts, but my friend said that it sounded like i was just reading from a paper. Do you feel the same ?




  • MonaALzaalan
    MonaALzaalan Posts: 1 observer rank

    Hi, thank you for sharing your video. You language is understandable and information can be delivered. The sound however at some points are not great, maybe you move a lot or microphone moves a lot.?
    the screen for the program was not clear to be honest, may be you can enlarge to fill the monitor!
    great effort anyway

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