Hi John I saw small preview parts of your video. Why the video is not in 1080P resolution ? Secondly I think your voice quality is not very good. Thirdly I think English is not you 1st Language, may be I am wrong but I felt it. At last you can be more successful if you have less stops and small pauses than now while you are speaking. I cannot comment on your content as I cannot see other parts. I hope this may help you thanks.
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