I know what you mean - after working on something like this for a long time, you start to lose your ability to see what you've made objectively! Overall I think your delivery is good. You're easy to understand, the pace seems reasonable, and I like how you're breaking things up with graphics here and there. But, you posted this looking for areas of improvement, so here are my first impressions. Bear in mind they are minor concerns: - It's great that you're exuding energy and enthusiasm; that's exactly what you're supposed to do. But it does come across as a little bit forced, with perhaps a few too many hand movements. I think many students would prefer to see more of your authentic personality, than seeing you delivering a scripted performance. (I'm guilty of this myself sometimes, too) I know it's easier said than done, but try talking to the camera as though it were a friend. - You might consider simulating a couple of different camera angles while editing, by zooming in on yourself a little bit when you're making a key point. It could help keep the "talking head" segments a little more dynamic. Audio and video quality, and your "set design" are all awesome. You're already ahead of 90% of the instructors on Udemy I'd say!
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