First off the good: - I love your profile picture, you look warm and friendly! - I am not a fan of greenscreen but yours makes a lot of sense - Your sound in the intro video is great, but there is a lot of background (bird?) in the second. Audacity will remove some of that and it's free. - I am not very familiar with Jamaican cuisine so some more general ideas are below - I like how you mentioned vegetarian, vegan options, ingredient swaps if necessary, and the cultural background to the cuisine. Some tips: - 33 minutes is very short, too short. - For a cooking course I expect to see some cooking! I want to see more; ingredients up close, explanation during the process, how you learned it, what it tastes like, show me the process of cooking, adding things to a pan, plating the food- make me hungry and wanting to head to out eat! - It's a bit ad hoc, I don't expect a full script for a cooking video but some of this seems too casual and off the top of your head, "what else do I need to tell you" and "what did I say?" could be removed in editing if needed as well - The landing page is a bit short Suggestions: Cooking delicious food from Jamaican cusine Learn how to make three tasty meals to feel like you are in Jamaica Make yourself an amazing Jamaican breakfast, lunch, and dinner to enjoy It's a good start, I would work on making it longer at least an hour and although you are a better cook than I am, one recipe video edited could be 10-15 minutes easy, and be sure if your plan is to share recipes is to include them in the supplemental material piece. 10 recipes could be a course that is 1.5-2 hours, include more visuals, live cooking content, and clean up some audio and I think you are good to go!
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