Hey @TejaswiniAllikanti - overall the content seems good. I watched through your preview video (thoughts below), please let me know if I can expand on any of this. I agree with Lawrence on the audio and your head angle at the start. For the audio: The opening audio isn't bad (I'm betting you're standing ~5-10 ft from your phone as you record in an open room), but a mic can definitely help improve that (if you can look for a lavalier or "lav" mic you can wear on your lapel, the wired ones are relatively inexpensive). The audio does change drastically when you go to screen sharing - having a mic will help smooth that (betting that was recorded on your computer mic, which tend to be lower-grade than phones). Around the 3 minute mark theres a LOT of interference If you have the ability you may want to add some graphics to the screen (e.g. you mention a number of statistics, splashing those on the screen can help make it more impactful). Personally I use iMovie to produce my videos and it's super simple to add on-screen text and graphics (happy to send more info over if you need it). For the one-screen text - you may be able to make the font bigger (the words disappear a bit into the background). There isn't an outro - I like to end with a "thank you for listening to my video, now go take the course" (or something similar).
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